Finally, Robinhood chose the right door, the lady’s door. He and the lady pretended to be married and went away to other kingdom.the princes was very sad . she cried all night waitinag for Robin. Her father was glad.

In the other Kingdom named Atena, there was chaos, Robin tried to save it. The King crowned him to be a leader of soldiers. He was lucky because it was not easy to be a leader of soldier Athena.

One day athena citzens were robbed by Persias. There were 10 person, 4 died and 6 could run away and reported to the king. The King got angry because it was not the first time Persia’s made trouble.

“what is it? It’s the second time they made problem. Let’s take a revenge and make them regret !”. king announced the attack to all citizens. He decide to take revenge which was lead by robin.

That was Robin’s expected time to kill the Persia’s King and married his daugther. On the bottle field he succeed to kill the king. Unfortunately, the princes was angry because of her father death. She refuse to marry him. Robin was very disappointed because hes effort was useless.

He was hurt and decided to kill himself by drinking poison. The princess regretted when she knew that Robin and the Lady just pretended to be married. Finally the persias chose her to be a queen and she decided to be a queen without a spouse.

The Process of Writing

The Process of Writing

                Writing is an interesting hobby if you have a willingness to try. It will be more pleasant if you try to write anything you like. Everyone has different hobby, so write your own story in English as your new hobby. It will make you more creative, increase your vocabulary, improve your grammar and the other advantages.  Then, I liked to write, especially short story, but I couldn’t finish until the end. I lacked of ideas, so some of my writing is not perfect. Since my lecturer told me about the process of writing, I feel it is easier to write because there are some steps that we must follow.

                The first step is Brainstorming. In this step, we have to collect the ideas and make important points. From each point, there are sub points that make it more specific. It is efficient to make our writing still in context and not too broad. It is also the important thing that will make our writing well-structured.

                The second step is drafting. It is a step to organize the points in brainstorming. From those points, we should arrange them to be a good paragraph and then make paragraphs to be a good writing. We should be careful in using grammar, capital letter, punctuation, and diction. Read it repeatedly to make sure that it is right and easy to be understood.

                The third step is finalizing. When we have finished making brainstorming and drafting, the next step is checking our writing. Don’t forget to read it carefully and check the using of grammar, capital letter, punctuation, and diction. Avoid confusing sentences.

                The last step is proofreading.  Ask a proofreader to check our writing. It is important because everyone has different perspective to our writing. We don’t have to be confident that our writing is perfect without other perception because our writing is not only for ourselves but it is also read by others, so this step can minimize our mistakes.

                This writing process really makes me easier in writing. We don’t need to be confused continuing our writing because the important points have been made, so start your writing and follow those steps.